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主动”还是“被动”?
发表时间:2020-03-24     阅读次数:     字体:【



主动”还是“被动”?




作为一位写作老师,除了教授正确的写作方法论——论证思路和方法之外,另一个让人头疼(秃)的就是学生的语言。

毕竟,你的句子首先需要做到正确;其次是多样;之后,咱们才能聊聊句子和句子之间的逻辑

你们写的句子,10句话里得有一半是人做主语,什么I can, you can, people can, government should, students need……

还有3句话是it做主语,什么it is impossible, it is known to all……

剩下2句话么……错的!


后来,在一个夜深人静、夜不能寐、月黑风高的夜晚,我在辗转反侧间明白了一个道理:中文是很少用“被动”的,除非,是在说一件不好的事情。

【例】

我被___________________。

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你想到了什么?是不是除了黑了就是绿了,除了打了就是抢了……偷了也成……

有梦想的同学们,不要忘了,你还可以 被!录!取!




好了言归正传,今天咱们来聊聊被动语态的问题。


什么情况下需要/可以使用被动语态?

1) 动作实施者很明显/不知道是谁,没必要提到

The streets are swept every day.

The library was built in 1890.

2) 当动作的实施者泛指人们:acknowledge, assume, believe, claim, consider, estimate, feel, find, know, presume, report, think, say等

He was suspected of receiving stolen goods.

3) 主动句的主语是不定代词one, you, they时,通常被动

This kind of advertisement is seen everywhere.

4) 在主从句中,使用被动语态可以避免改变句子主语

When their mother was ill, neighbors looked after the children.

When their mother was ill, the children were looked after by neighbors.

5) get/have sth done

We had all our money stolen while we were on holiday.


以上这些……………………其实……

都!不!重!要!


重要的是,你会写成什么?你会犯哪些错误?你怎么样才能避免这些错误?




规则1-3解读:

记住,在你不停地重复人做主语,it做主语的时候,想一想:这句话我是否可以通过使用被动语态来实现句型的变化和多样?


【例1】

Schools hold various seminars, workshops and conferences so that teachers are able to have some discussion about effective teaching methods and techniques.

Various seminars, workshops and conferences are regularly held so that teachers are able to have some discussion about effective teaching methods and techniques.


【例2】

Students cannot find out their academic problems without a certain period of course-learning.

Academic problems will only be revealed after a certain period of course-learning.

【例3】

Travelling to a different place with beautiful scenery and fresh air will help people prevent sub-health and make them more motivated in their studies and works.

Travelling to a different place with beautiful scenery and fresh air can be functioned as both a vaccine to prevent sub-health and a motivation for people to work and study harder.

规则5解读:背过就完了

【例】

这一点可以被几乎世界上的每一家大公司证明,包括那些已经在市场上取得了主导位置的,如可口可乐和苹果,他们都投资了大量的钱,使他们的产品和标志显示在电视上,互联网上和报纸上。

This point is well illustrated by almost every company in the world, including those that have already achieved dominance in market such as Coca Cola and Apple, both of which invest large sums of money to have their products and logos shown on TV, the Internet and newspapers.

与规则4相关的错误

【例】

对一小部分人看上去清晰和简单的事情,如果将数千人的意见纳入到考虑范围内,就需要非常严谨的思考了。

Things which seem clear and simple to a small proportion of people will require serious consideration if taking thousands of people’s opinions into account.

对么?对么?对么?到底对不对!?


回答我:taking作为一个分词/动作,主语是什么?是谁take thousands of people’s opinion into account?

——人啊!


那么再回答我:整个句子的主语是什么?

——things啊!


那么再再回答我:分词的逻辑主语和主句的逻辑主语一致么?

——不一致啊!


那么 对么?对么?对么?到底对不对!?

——不对啊!


那么问题来了,怎么改?

——被动啊!

Things which seem clear and simple to a small proportion of people will require serious consideration if thousands of people’s opinions are taken into consideration.


真规则1:单独的分词作状语,分词的逻辑主语要和主句的主语一致

真规则2:状语从句中,只有主语主语和从句主语一致的时候,从句主语才可以省略成,状语从句部分简化为分词/不定式


问题又来了,用主动行不行?

——也不是不行吧

Things which seem clear and simple to a small proportion of people will require serious consideration if we take thousands of people’s opinions into consideration.


两个句子哪一个比较好呢?

——你还记得规则123么?



有点感觉了么?我们再看另一个句子。

【例】

这些花费会转嫁到学生身上,并反映在高昂的学费里,剥夺了很多贫困生上大学的机会。


转嫁怎么说?反映是什么?剥夺的用法是什么?——这些都不会的学生请你打开小蚁教育托福核心词汇1800


These costs will pass on to students and reflect in the high tuition, depriving many poor students of the chance to attend college.


对么?对么?对么?到底对不对!?


灵魂拷问1:“转嫁这些花费到学生身上”怎么讲?

答:pass on these costs to students


咦?你发现问题了么?those cost其实是pass on的宾语哦!


所以问题可能不在于你不知道【被动语态】这个名词,而是你根本无法识别这里需要用被动才是对的——你的中文和英文转换之间出现了问题。


真规则3:一个句子的宾语做另一个句子的主语的时候,要用【被动语态】

The cat broke the vasethe vase was broken by the cat.

Schools will pass on those costs to students→those costs will be passed on to students.

灵魂拷问2:【这些花费反映了学费】还是【学费反映了这些花费】?

答:后者

即,high tuition reflect these costs èthese costs are reflected in high tuition

整句话的正确翻译:

These costs will be passed on to students and are reflected in the high tuition, depriving many poor students of the chance to attend college.



有点感觉了么?


【练习】

这个世界改变得很快, 这种影响不仅仅体现在知识的加速更新上,也体现在年轻人身上,这些年轻人的三观、习惯、兴趣爱好都与之前的人大不相同。

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the world is changing so fast and the influence is manifested not just by the acceleration of knowledge updating, but also by young people whose values, habits and interests are so different from those of their counterparts in the past.

被动,whose引导的定语从句,三观用英文讲是values,不是three values, 更不是three outlooks……还有,比较结构比较内容需要一致。

现在就剩下一个问题了:

什么动词后面可以接宾语——及物动词

那么哪些动词是及物动词?——我怎么知道,你问字典啊!


不及物动词可以接宾语么?——不可以,但是有动词加了介词之后就可以

那么加什么介词?——我怎么知道,你问字典啊!

【作业】

1. Interfere干涉,reduce下降减少,decrease减少,decline减少,哪些是及物动词?


2. 翻译:

干涉我的决定:________________.

你敢让你的作文过一下E-rater么?

你真的会写句子么?

在你句子都写不对的时候,直接学【论证思路和方法论】合适么?



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